Ancillary Production - Drafts

The idea behind the printed images of my ancillary work is that I intend to take them away, show them to friends and family and note any changes needed to be made for Monday's lesson. I will present the feedback on a blog post. In the meantime, feel free to leave a comment and let me know what you think of the images so far - is there anything you would change about them? Ignore the green tint!